ChernobyllyInclined

In general, this strikes me as your best work. But the others are right, it fizzles out. A "short" story doesn't mean a three paragraph story. Short stories are often ...

Actually, I wasn't really asking if it had potential. Everything has potential, anyhow. Even the most ridiculous, idiotic crap you can think of. It has potential to be crappy, or ...

"Uh," said the Jared Colquite. ______ What if there was no one left to revere Orson Welles but me? Would I acquire some deep sense of meaning in this world? ...

Yes! I have very serious problems with the girls who think they can demand everything from their boyfriends--including his agreement to everything they say--and then justify it by saying, "Well, ...

You are right that there is a valid and striking difference between modern art and renaissance/gothic art. But unless you give us your own objective definition of art and argue ...

Alright, I've never posted in non-fiction, so I'm an amateur. Regardless of that--if you can bring yourself to disregard such a thing--I will tell you about my mess of an ...

Probably the best part is when you say you are not insane. Everyone seems to think it makes them cool to claim to be insane. It just makes them stupid. ...

This was actually pretty good. To be completely honest, I'm not interested by stories that involve highschools. They're overused and boring and they don't have that many different directions they ...

Alright. ________ “Oh, nothing. Just--just food,” I said pathetically, feeling the idiocy seep out of my skin. “You eat weapons?” asked the man, his appearance reminding me vaguely of person ...

Sort of a draft of a thing that I wrote before Frankie and all his running. I would write it different now. But I still want to shove it in ...

Yes! The beginning of my nano! I hate exclamation marks! Shut up! _______ Every bit of the ground was eaten by blue paint. There were handprints on the walls and ...

Dammit, Prok. Yes, I like it. And you are always such a surprising boy. But I feel like there's something missing. The ideas are compelling, slightly [brilliant] and mostly fantastic. ...

You definitely keep the suspense and I like Galyda's perspective in regards to all your neighborhood drama. It caused some amount intrigue where before there was only monotony. Honestly, there ...

...--Stayed, I did. For the whole thing. Even when things got nasty, I was destined to stay. Dire, dour, sour, hours of genius. The letter 'd' keeps coming to me. ...

Times done Nano: 3456 Nano name: Derivatives (like underwater kinds) Genre: Yes Plot: A boy likes to paint houses blue when their people aren't around. Get's arrested. Get's rescued by ...