ChernobyllyInclined

Marman

Sweet avatar. Just because you can do something, doesn't mean you should. I think it would sound better to have Sean say, "Babe, you already are drunk." Even though I ...

Wow, Babe. I was so stunned when I first read this that it took me 22,000 hours to review it, as a certain supposed tank engine might say. I'm going ...

Well, sorry that no one had much helpful advice. But they're right that you've done a good job. Anyway, it looks like you've decided to make this solid romance, which ...

This is for Clo's contest that I can't remember the name of. It's about good things becoming not good. I've always found funerals to be solemn, exciting, wonderful--but this one ...

Thai food is kind of like the bottom of someone's shoes that they never wear. I can't believe it took me so long to review this. Of course I read ...

Good, good. Never forget to like your story. As Chesterton says, you'll never truly make something amazing until you love it. Nope, that's not exactly what he said. But it ...

Well, well, well. I'm obviously in love with mysterious and dangerous blue-jacketed-fellow. I think he was wearing a blue jacket. Regardless, alright. That other random person had a point about ...

Yay! Another surprising piece from a land where Rick and Kayo used to rule on high! No more, I say, no more. Not that I don't truly adore Rick and ...

Well, Ringo, I know you'll never read this, but I just wanted to congratulate you on your insightful comments. No, I'm not being mean. You're a new member and so ...

I don't get bored, Prokaryote. And how can someone be "out of their mind"? Aren't minds inside of people, not the other way around? So, if anything, my mind was ...

When I was small, silly, pointless, I waited for a crazy boy to sit down next to me and ask a question I had never imagined. I would wonder about ...

There once was a boy named Marcus Hall, who never went out his bedroom door. You could probably leave out that last part. It sounded a little awkward and repetitive. ...

This sounds like an essay. Start it out like, "I don't much like mud. Haven't ever liked it, really. And today the most amazing thing happened. A nasty, stupid, horrible ...

Highschool is so boring. Unless you're going to blow up the school in the middle and send everyone to the unknown Virtuoso region of San Derinina. I commend you for ...