ChernobyllyInclined

Yay, more of my favorite story. This was interesting, the description held very closely with the suspense, I quite liked it. I agree with Vampy though, this is probably too ...

You need to space the paragraphs. You'll get more reviews that way, it much easier to read when there are spaces between the paragraphs. At the beginning you said you ...

Thanks for the reviews. Anyone who likes this at all, review some of my other stuff too. And, Sela, the repetition in that sentence is barely noticeable. So there.

I liked this. Most certainly. Ink got most of the technical problems but heres one that she missed... I glance up from over my dampened leather notebook. Surveying the streets ...

Hm. If I were to be completely honest, I don't like romantic fiction - gay romance even less. The writing was good; the description very vivid. Characters: The characters were ...

Ah. What a terrible story. I find your characters less then sympathetic and if, at any time, you decide to write more of this I will be forced to use ...

Hmmm. This is definitely an interesting idea, you just didn't present it in an interesting way. When writing this kind of Sci-Fi it is very important to hook peoples attention; ...

I finally got to it! Yay. Sorry it took me so long. First of all, I'm glad you are attempting writing. From this point on, you can only get better. ...

Barely uncomfortable inspiration. I have never written Sci-Fi, and I have no idea how. Any suggestions will be much appreciated. By both of us. _____ Where is infinity? They used ...

This was actually very interesting. The idea was slightly original and the way it was carried out was also above certain expectations. While I liked it, there was also a ...

Hmmm...This is an interesting idea, but it wasn't done in a very interesting way. If you are going to write a 'highschool, go to a dance, boyfriend' kind of story, ...

This was much, much better. I'm actually quite surprised, you seem to have completely fixed the problem with pace that you were having before. I liked Drake quite a bit ...

I agree with the person above, lose the scottish accent. I think this could have been good, maybe even deep, but it was too drawn out without any important description ...

Yay - I liked this. It was clever and slightly random in a pleasing way. I only found one rough spot that I know you could improve... "I went with ...

It's a little creepy that he left his sister behind and let her burn in a fire he had created. Creepy, but not consistent. Before, he acted almost affectionate toward ...