ChernobyllyInclined

This is the end. I'm going now. And I wish you all a very fond... ______ The night was yellow. I kicked her door. Or I kicked a door that ...

Odd that your last piece of writing found itself brutalized; this was actually very well done. Either you really, really, really improved, or your last reviewers were just insecure little ...

Hahahahaha. Honestly. This was just choc-full of silliness, and I salute you for it. And, by the way, you need to write some more weird stuff about sprites and such. ...

So I read a book called “Elementary Coral”; and it’s about a boy who steals the fortune of a rich, snobby, irritating brat of a private school… girl. He kills ...

Egad! what is mesa saying? That just came to me. Sorry. Please accept my most sincere apologies. I beg you. FUNNY AS A FOX. This really did capture a few ...

This surprised me. It was actually different from the others. Congratulations. “Thank you.” I told him in awe of being so close to him. He was so quite it felt ...

This was interesting. The idea was a good one, I think it just needs to be better developed. CHARACTERS: I liked how you introduced Cara, but I feel like it ...

First of all, this: A few hours later the men showed no sign of falling asleep, and Erik was getting impatient. The leader had given the girl a drug that ...

I know, I know. You're tired of me wasting my brilliance on lame contests (no offense, Tiger; Tiger responds with a quick, "None taken"), but, you see, I have not ...

That was the whole point of the contest, silly! I don't get enough opportunities to look into people's souls; it's actually quite enlightening. I won't abuse it, though. I think ...

You know what I really don't get, cool-person-who-joined-my-contest? Why you were Mesh when you first posted this story. I read it, and then I said to myself, "Mesh is a ...

First of all, why is this in Action/Adventure? It seems like a romance to me. You might want to move it. It's also a little long; that might be why ...

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I don't feel like this is going anywhere. _____ Moments later--moments that she wouldn‘t ever remember--she found herself on her back on the sidewalk, blood in her hair and freezing ...

Not to be mean or anything, Rosey, but you're acting thick. "What does she owe him?" ...Um, children don't owe their parents anything? Not respect, not even deference? That seemed ...