ChernobyllyInclined

Why do you ask if its strange when no one is asking? Of course its painful when someone you love leaves. Everyone knows that. And so I don't think any ...

Well, I liked it. The idea at least. I would recommend not posting so much in one thread - this was quite a bit to read all at once. Perhaps ...

I like the idea. I've always found imaginary friends to be something that I cannot grow weary of. But I am fairly certain that you could have done this better. ...

Hmmm... I don't know too much about poetry but I'll try to give you a good review. This was not very original. You told alot but did not show very ...

I don't know what to do with this stupid story! Thanks for the feedback. And I know what you're talking about but I can't seem to fix it. Whenever I ...

Ah, now to the next. And it is late, yes. 'Bleach' is the word. Holy Folly The woods were thin. Trees tilted and broken stood at unnatural angles and the ...

Here will I place my five stories for Cals contest. I don't want to make FIVE NEW threads for these sillly stories. It would be silly of someone silly like ...

You're twenty! It says up there. I didn't notice before. Frightfully silly. The tangling is the whole point. The style matches the story. It must be read carefully. Like Dickens ...

I liked the writing; the description was pretty and vivid. But there was no tension, not grabbing enough for a first chapter... Characters: Jason was not an interesting character. He ...

I have a feeling you will get published. I have a few technical corrections for you. But they are minor. First, at the beginning, the '3' needs to be 'three'. ...

Hmmm...this really had nothing to it. There was no description, nothing to grab the readers attention, no character development and no plot. The reader has no connection to anything thats ...

First of all, you need to separate the paragraphs. You'll get more reviews that way. Anyway, this was slightly interesting. I believe the idea has potential, it just needs to ...

You need to space the paragraphs. Its really hard to read when they're all stuck together like that. PM when you fix it and I will be glad to give ...

I read the first chapter a week ago but didn't review it because you already had a thousand reviews and I didn't have any. I was being arbitrary in a ...

Someone reads Card! Yippee! Just finished Manalive by Chesterton. Haven't read much modern stuff in a while. Don't miss it at all. Actually, it should all die. 'Cept Card of ...