ChernobyllyInclined

Really quite excellent. Honestly, I think you've kept a much superior consistency and pace in this story than any other. The characters are engaging, Lavender is only frustrating to sex/romance ...

In three more seconds you'll be a better writer than I. As usual, all technical aspects are in working order. Well oiled. Ignition lights are on. Stop hitting people with ...

I'm studying saints. And this is what I came up with. Almost flash fiction. Tell me what you think. _ The confetti was like a the Universe, vomited all over ...

In honor of all my pirate and circus-performing friends. I haven't posted anything in a long time. Partly because I haven't written anything in a long time. But along with ...

'Can't believe it took me a cough and a half to review this. Ah, that guy is one funny little bugger. I definitely liked his description, and his dialogue was ...

Well, well, well, it's the -- darnit, Robin Hood isn't in my head the way it used to be. James. Come back to me. Anyway, BABE, this was great. You ...

Perhaps more odd than I had at first imagined that mine will be the only review for this gripping chapter. Perhaps it is my mood, but probably not. Anyhow, I ...

Well, well, Bonzai, now what do we have here? I don't know, Shenzi. Ed? *insane laughing* Just what I was thinking. A trio of trespassers! ___ I don't think that's ...

This was good. I liked the simplicity of the writing; it got the point across well. As far as characters go, I believe it was necessary to at least hint ...

Okay, first of all, I can't help loving the way words make friends, and go on beach trips, and take tap dancing lessons in your stories. I'm used to it, ...

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Indeed, the rating is for language. Something in sincerity -- _____________ “I love you,” she said. “Like the absurd, irreverent, incredibly fun thirteen year old brother I never had.” “Just

Thanks, Lucy, Sunny. You guys gave some great feedback -- I don't often get feedback worth crap. So thanks. Music is played by the mad man. I wait with Great ...

Well, my last review was sort of an encompassment. But I promised another, so don't expect anymore Three Stooges quotes. I liked how you developed Triedtha more. It was good. ...

Well, as far as compliments go, I shall vow to give realtruegoodtruereal ones. For instance, I must say you have much improved on pace. I was just remembering how absolutely ...