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Ever Happily
I don't understand this. In any case, all following chapters will be in this thread so please specify which one you are reviewing when you do. Thanks. _____ People always ...
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Untitled Differentiation
I wrote this when I was about fourteen. Now I'm eleven. _______ Yes, Ada was crying again. Her best friend had played a painful joke on her, and now her ...
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Yes, What a Delightful Boy (1)
So, I hate romance. And I hate it when people end the first chapter with two strangers making out. And not prostitute strangers, presumably. But I wanted to see if ...
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Derivatives 1.1
Yes! The beginning of my nano! I hate exclamation marks! Shut up! _______ Every bit of the ground was eaten by blue paint. There were handprints on the walls and ...
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Derivatives 1.2
Alright. ________ “Oh, nothing. Just--just food,” I said pathetically, feeling the idiocy seep out of my skin. “You eat weapons?” asked the man, his appearance reminding me vaguely of person ...
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JEWS
When I was small, silly, pointless, I waited for a crazy boy to sit down next to me and ask a question I had never imagined. I would wonder about ...
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Yes, What a Delightful Boy (2)
I don't feel like this is going anywhere. _____ Moments later--moments that she wouldn‘t ever remember--she found herself on her back on the sidewalk, blood in her hair and freezing ...
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You would cut somebody's head off (1)
I know, I know. You're tired of me wasting my brilliance on lame contests (no offense, Tiger; Tiger responds with a quick, "None taken"), but, you see, I have not ...
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You would cut somebody's head off (2)
This is the end. I'm going now. And I wish you all a very fond... ______ The night was yellow. I kicked her door. Or I kicked a door that ...
