Chelseam2

Nuuuuu! Don't fall asleep! =O I looooove this. Write more! ;D You fit motion into it very nicely. (Like, the car-ride.) And you are very good at human emotions and ...

Hmmmm. I like these. X3

I quietly enter the pub, immediately inhaling smoke. Making an effort not to cough, I mosy on over to a table in the far back corner, and plop down. I ...

Because the banana's identity was stolen by Spanish ice-cream's pronunciation. ;3 Why the heck do people -hate- Justin Bieber just because he sings like a girl?

*Prologue* The rustling and bustling of the people in the market-place signified the waking of the day. People trundled along with their wares, keeping a tight grip on the reigns ...

Hello, I'm Chelseam2, and I shall be reviewing your story today. “Liam!” I yelp, pushing the bow sideways, making him miss. The girl looks up towards where we are in ...

I love it. It expresses the intended emotions beautifully, and it feels very genuine. It describes life, and how things work. (In a way. I will explain.) I see this ...

I really like it. You've captured the emotion in a very beautiful way. It's got good rhythm to it.

A gray, shiny car rolled along the empty side-street in the night. It had just begun to drizzle, and through the window, a young, blond-haired woman could hear the pitter-patter, ...

I really enjoyed it. You represented pain and consequence clearly, but also relief. ;D And, because I am a Grammar-freak (XD): "I quickly stood up embracing this person and I ...

*edit: By the way, people, it's not a poem. =_= Beep. Beep. Beep. Life is a fragile thing. In a moment, it can be cut short, affecting all the other ...