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Amen! You really hit the nail on the head! I hope God uses you and this document to witness to people. It was really good! God bless you!

Song: Manipulative He says he loves her You know she loves him I can't really tell On her he descends -- Says he'll kill himself Just to see her cry ...

AMEN, my sister in Christ.

Very thought provoking and smooth. Although I don't agree with the part that we "just made God up", I thought it was very good. Now. Questions. If there is no ...

I really love it. There's a lot of motion and emotion to it. You can just see it and feel it. =O

Ooooh. Very interesting. O.o I love how you intergrated the speech into the action. Nice cliff-hanger. XD (I love Naruto, btw)

VERY beautiful. I took some pictures myself at the Frederick Meijer Gardens. Where did you take yours? (I like the perspective on the yellow flowers.)

I HATE COFFEE. ...but the poem was epic, and quite dramatic. I loved it. XD I was saying to my fellow classmates, "This person like coffee too much." Besides tasting ...

Time. Have you ever heard of anime?

Ooh. Creepy. XD I like the way it was built, and how you repeated words to give it a special affect. Liked reading it. Loved the "Who's next?". Not me! ...

;3; This was beautiful. When Lorenzo was feeding the bird the last of their food, I was like, "Oh, that dirty-dog!" XD But his epicness by saving her, and kissing ...

O.o Smoking is bad for you, but this was epic. X3

Awwwwww. This is so amazing! I love it, and how you've built it! X3 Beautiful.

CHAPTER 2 Having awoken early in the morning before the intended time, Ryiiko, the thief, felt inclined to stay in bed, and stare up at the ceiling. Warm sunlight oozed ...

I love it. I really love your use of words. It makes you sound extremely talented and resourceful. It all flows smoothly together, and the reactions are very human. I ...