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Re: Dreams Tell Lies - Chapter Nine
Heyy :) 1) Who knocked her out? 2) They couldn’t stand the fact that I wanted t o make a choice without caring what they said about it.” And 3) ...
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: That's So Edward
Aha. Love it :) Thanks for the laugh! x
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: Harry Potter, Voldemort and a cookie.
Hello, It was good One thing... he asked calmly even though the pain surged through his whole entir e body. Entire should have an e on the end.
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: Twilight *Contains excessive nagging and puke worthyness*
This was good :) One thing though... Edward was unconditionally perfect and constantly dazzling doesn’t mean any random is allowed to fall in love with him. Any random what? It ...
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: the sparkly vampire and chosen wizard tales 2
Aha this is really good but you did miss out some punctuation. Keep it up though :)
Jun 4, 2011 -
Re: Night Creatures, Chapter One
This looks good. A bit short, but that doesn't really matter. Lucy looked at the rest of the village that she had just attacked, the rest of the pack she ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: the wait.
This is really good! Keep it up.
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: The Chosen
This sounds really good. I have always like to read a book to do with God and that. I really hope you carry on. Chels
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Bloodlust
This is good stuff! You should really carry it on! Chels :) x
May 30, 2011