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Re: Concaptivus - prologue
I love this! There is only one thing I would change. Maybe in the first paragraph instead of saying bored, try saying "weary", I think it would have a positive ...
Jul 7, 2013
I love this! There is only one thing I would change. Maybe in the first paragraph instead of saying bored, try saying "weary", I think it would have a positive ...
Jul 7, 2013