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Hi! The paragraph in which Jet is talking about how he likes Casie, sounds rushed and a little off. I feel like the story is rushed but other than that ...

I really like this a lot! I can't wait to keep reading and I will try to fit reading your novel into my writing schedule. One thing that bugged me ...

Thanks for the review. What did you mean "her emo talk"? Also could you tell which Gabriel and Eloise moments were boring? Knowing the answers to these questions will help ...

Thanks so much for this review!

Thanks a lot for this review!

Thanks for this review. I would really like to know what you thought of them chapter. Did you like the characters? Is the plot developing fine? None the less, thanks ...

Yeah, I found the capitalization distracting.

Thanks for the review!!!

I'm back now :)

*high five*

Thanks so much for this review. In this chapter I was trying to show Eloise's past with other characters (very important characters). Anyway I'm a little bummed out that you ...

Yay! Thanks so much for this review! I understand what you mean about Eloise but I actually never wanted Eloise to be awkward. She is supposed to be an anxious ...

Thanks so much for the review. I understand what you mean about Penelope but I designed her to be kind and protective. Her anger is her getting upset that Lil' ...

Thanks so much for the review, Snazz Pizzazz! :D

Thank you so much! Eloise does know about kansas city. The entire time she was aware that this would be their last summer together (I've mentioned it in other chapters). ...