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Re: A Colonial Tea
Hi CaptainJack! I like the theme you have going on. As someone who loves tea and cats this has been really nice to read. When reading the poems I couldn't ...
Apr 19, 2021 -
Re: a journal of deep breaths
17. Pillow Forts when we were kids we made forts out of pillows and blankets, imagined a whole world within them, awed at the way light seeped in through the ...
Apr 18, 2021 -
Re: April Madness 2021
Cherry Blossoms I heard the cherry blossoms are falling in Vancouver, cascading down to the blanket the streets you walk on. I wonder what it must be like, soft petals ...
Apr 17, 2021 -
Re: a journal of deep breaths
16. Still in the absence of you I make the most of my world. sit in silence and watch the rainfall, listen to the small sounds around: crickets singing in ...
Apr 17, 2021 -
Re: a journal of deep breaths
15. Mist the day lingers in limbo between rain and clear weather, a mist hangs in the air. fuzzy yellow light radiates from distant windows. it’s the kind of weather ...
Apr 16, 2021 -
Re: a journal of deep breaths
Thank you @LilPWilly I'm glad you like my poems :)
Apr 15, 2021 -
Re: a journal of deep breaths
14. Phone Calls your voice is low in my ear. I close my eyes and listen to the mundane tasks of your day, to your worries, your laugh. the sound ...
Apr 15, 2021 -
Re: a journal of deep breaths
13. Cherry Blossoms I heard the cherry blossoms are falling in Vancouver, cascading down to the blanket the streets you walk on. I wonder what it must be like, soft ...
Apr 14, 2021 -
Re: a journal of deep breaths
12. Spread Thin tell my why my brain feels like an empty jam jar that I keep having to scrap the edges of, glass screeching against the knife. each time ...
Apr 13, 2021 -
Re: I find peace, even over the clouds.
Carina!!!! I'm obsessed with your themed poems. They are simple and yet so profound. Honestly, the simplicitiy is incredible. I love how the theme developed. It's nihilistic but comforting. As ...
Apr 12, 2021 -
Re: April Madness 2021
Why does group B and D only have two winners unlike group A and C?
Apr 12, 2021 -
Re: a journal of deep breaths
11. Delayed I want to float and forget, then, lay in the sun, turn crisp like a t-shirt hung to dry. feel the heat kiss my back, smell chlorine on ...
Apr 12, 2021 -
Re: a journal of deep breaths
10. A Step Outside the night swallows the neighborhood whole, outside the world is still. in the darkness water gurgles from across the fence, insects sing their lullabies from the ...
Apr 11, 2021 -
Re: a journal of deep breaths
9. Aquarium we stand in the deep blue staring through glass. behind us the rubber floor squeaks underneath sneakers, young voices echo. some swim, grazing the sand, hiding in coral. ...
Apr 10, 2021 -
Re: April Madness 2021
Enclosed The wind shudders, shuffling the green-faced leaves. Sunlight peers through the cracks of blue sky between the tree branches that sway, bend, creak in the breeze. I sigh along ...
Apr 10, 2021
