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Re: Haven Chapter One
I was a city girl, not a small town person. My mother decided we needed a break from the city after my father was labeled the Serial Lover by the ...
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Re: The Tales of Alexandria Hamilton Chapter Two
My flashback is soon over, for we arrive at the airport. Dad and Rick unloaded the trunks of their cars. It took over an hour for us to check in ...
Sep 11, 2010 -
Re: The Tales of Alexandria Hamilton Chapter One
Please help me decide if this is going anywhere. Tell me if I should write more or not. Thanks!! Vacations are one of the few things in the world I ...
Sep 11, 2010 -
Re: Haven (Proluge)
I need help thinking of a title. Send me a PM with your pick. Thanks! Love is suppose to be the best thing in the world, right? That's what Casey, ...
Aug 10, 2010 -
Re: The Psychic Life of Rose Wheeler: Chapter Eight
"I think we should call him and tell him to meet us somewhere. What do you think?" I said after about an hour of searching for Logan. My feet hurt ...
Jun 1, 2010 -
Re: The Psychic Life of Rose Wheeler: Chapter Seven
The silk. The color of the ivory. Hell, even the spots of mud were the same. But it couldn't be her's, could it? She told me she died with William. ...
May 25, 2010 -
Re: The Psychic Life of Rose Wheeler: Chapter Six
The tall shadow was turned, not looking toward us. It was looking out towards the woods. It looked like it was looking for something particular. I don't know what it ...
May 21, 2010 -
Re: The Psychic Life of Rose Wheeler: Chapter Five
I crunched my cereal in silence, just staring at him. "So," I started, "what year are you?" I took another bite. "I'm a sophmore starting tomorrow." He said. he was ...
May 11, 2010 -
Re: Secrets - Chapter 3
I liked it but I agree with the others.
Apr 19, 2010 -
Re: The Psychic Life of Rose Wheeler: Chapter Four
I dressed into dry clothes and headed down the stairs. I went exploring for my father and Shane. I popped my head into the most modern looking room: the kitchen. ...
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: The Psychic Life of Rose Wheeler: Chapter Three
We went down the hall. We passed a living room, sitting room, kitchen, and a powder room. At the end of the hall, we came to a grand staircase. They ...
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: Secrets - Chapter 1
I actually liked it a lot, but there are a few details about what the character is wearing. I think that you should slowly reveal clues about her and not ...
Mar 31, 2010 -
Re: The Psychic Life of Rose Wheeler: Chapter Two
The car ride to our new town was horrid. Between my crying and the awkward silence afterward, it was really bad. I did absolutely nothing except pretend to look out ...
Mar 26, 2010 -
Re: Do You Remember?
I loved it!! If I had tearducts I would have balled my eyes out. (Just pulling your leg.(About the tear ducts part not the part that said i loved it ...
Mar 16, 2010 -
Re: The Psychic Life of Rose Wheeler: Chapter 1
I was running around my room in a rush, trying to find my IPod touch. It couldn't be that hard to find, I thought, My room is empty. It is ...
Mar 16, 2010
