CharlotteGrace

I think that it was okay. It wasn't the best story I've read but it was good nonetheless.

Hey! Charlotte here! I like the feel of the story. but I think it's going too fast. I mean that at the beginning you were talking about her walk to ...

I sat at the diner with my food. It was the greatest burger I had ever had. Once I had finished my meal, I left the money I owed Rosy, ...

We had reached the town then, I mean the downtown part. The woods gave way to little shops and pubs. The shops were all centered around a park with a ...

I liked it a lot, but I was a little confuzzled. The way you typed it, It confused me. I had a hard time defining the paragraphs. That's really the ...

Hey! Charlotte Grace here! Okay let me start off that I have no idea where the story is going so far. I just thought you sould know that. I'm a ...

Hello again! So, I am even more confuzzled on this. Maybe it's just me missing something or I don't know but when did Murtagh and Isabelle date or court or ...

Hey Eli!! So far I love the story. BUt I'm a little confused about a couple of things. 1. What time is this set in? It makes it really confusing ...

I like it a lot. I love the tale of Robin hood and how people put their own spins on it, and so far I'm liking your spin on it. ...

Thanks for ya'll's advice.I'll remember it when I write the next installment. -Charlotte Grace

Hey ya'll! First of all I like the title. I'll spend hours at my local library writing. I just thought that was cool. Anyway I can totally relate to her ...

Hey AddictiontoFiction! Okay I love how it's set back in older times. I love period pieces (I've seen the Titanic over twenty times and cried each time) anyway I like ...

Hey ya'll! Okay so I absolutly love where the story is headed or at least where I think it's headed. . . Anyway I love that Halley is different from ...

I agree with the others. It needed some work but over all I liked it a lot.

Hey! I love the story line of it but I'm a little confuzzled about who the main character of this book is and what it's about. I think you should ...