CharlotteGrace

I liked it a lot. I thought the title was a little weird which is why I didn't read it sooner. Maybe just changet the title a bit, but that's ...

I liked it a lot. I thought the title was a little weird which is why I didn't read it sooner. Maybe just changet the title a bit, but that's ...

I liked it a lot. I thought the title was a little weird which is why I didn't read it sooner. Maybe just changet the title a bit, but that's ...

I liked it a lot. I thought the title was a little weird which is why I didn't read it sooner. Maybe just changet the title a bit, but that's ...

Hey Okay so I'm not going to tell you what needs fixing because that would just be repetative. So I like the story a lot, granted I just started it ...

Hey! Okay so I don't know if this chapter is done yet or not. So comments and reviews are much appraciated! Charlotte Grace It was only minutes until they come. ...

I liked it a lot. I thought it was cool that you made it about adpotion and the struggles of an adoption child. Its really true.

I really liked it a lot. I just started them today but I will defintely read the rest. -Charlotte Grace

I agree with Lava about the story being a little "blah" after the others but still thinking its a great story. -Charlotte Grace

Hey! Your chapter was EVERYWHERE in this chapter. It was bouncing off the walls and everything. Not to sound harsh or anything but it wasn't as good as the others. ...

Hey! I was wondering what was up with Kevin and Victoria? Are they going to end up with eachother because if they are you should have seriously added more touchy-feely ...

Hey Pink! Okay I liked this chapter a lot, but it kinda contrdicts the character of Nick in my eyes. In the previous chapters, you had said that he had ...

I liked i. I don't think that you should outline every part of the fight, but just enough to tell what's happenning. I have this pet peeve about capitilization, and ...

Hey Pink! I thought this piece was different from all the others, either by your writing style or the fact that the main character is a fighter. I defintly like ...

There were some mistakes, as the others have stated, but I didn't like it very much. The description didn't pop out and let me draw a picture about the characters ...