CharlotteGrace

Sonya was right, he was back the next night. He sat in the back this time. I was happy when I found that he hadn’t sat in my section. Sonya ...

This was great! I am fascinated by unsolved murder cases and I have heard of this one before. It was in 1912 in Villisca, Iowa. Everyone in the house was ...

Ohmylord I loved this so much. I absolutely LOVE the Plain White T's and this song. It was amazing that you could write this story so true to the lyrics ...

I love this peice. The way you describe love is so realistic and relatable to people everywhere. You did by far the best at describing it.

I absolutely love this story! You want to know why I love it? It's because it is absolutely, 100% unique. I have never ever heard a story like this before ...

“Dianna, good luck.” That’s the last thing my father said before he got in the car that killed him. He had just dropped me off at my college after a ...

After I got out of the shower, I thought of what to do about the clothes. I quickly grabbed my laptop and searched how to get rid of blood stains. ...

Hey! Back again! Now that I have had my jolt of caffine, I feel much more. . . . .relaxed, rather than on edge like before. :) I'm pretty sure ...

Hey! I really liked this a lot. It has definite potential and I am so excited to read the rest! There were some spelling mistakes, "apereaer=appear" and "smae=same" That was ...

OMIGOD!! I loved it! I liked how the whole heart break thing was setup and how he thought he was protecting her by being mean to her. I thought it ...

Hey. There really isn't much left to say about the nick picking that the others haven't already said. I love the idea of it. The two boys being the reason ...

Hey. I loved this story it was simple an' sweet. I loved how she is overconfident about herself. You don't really see that anymore in the real world, so it ...

“How’d you. . .” It puzzled me. Clooney never knew about my problems, if he did he wouldn’t let me experience everything I have. Only Johnson and-gulp-Laney know or knew. ...

Okay. Thanks for the great feedback. I will definitly consider it in my next chapter. The way I spell things is very old english. I was raised by a history ...

Hey! Okay. This chapter was very short in my opinion of chapters I've read. (other than the Maximum Ride series). But anyway, I think that you should have gone more. ...