Charlotte1

I'm Charlotte. I'm 8. I loved your story but at the end when you said heavens did you mean heaven's ? I liked it when you gave description on how ...

I think this was a very good story. I got a bit confused at some points like when you're talking about 'Madame Gill' and then you're saying 'I', so are ...

I thought your story was very good though I did spot a few mistakes. 'A where' for aware and 'too' when you really meant 'to'. (bleeding too death.) You used ...

I am 8 years old. Here is the first part of my new story which I wrote all by myself. Codebreaker 1 – The Daughter of the Magician Olly blinked. ...

I am 8. Perhaps you could explain a bit more about what the 'solution' was because it wasn't that clear. This is now Charlotte's dad typing. The style was excellent ...

I don't have much to say but I would like to take the oppurtunity to say that this is a fabulous piece of work. Well done and keep it up! ...

The Girl on the Floor I have a little girl called Morgan. Well she’s not actually little. She’s sixteen now and has been trying to find a really cool boyfriend. ...

I should have also said that it would be very good if you could fix all the little things (including making sure that the spaces between characters are accurate .For ...

The title makes you want to read it! I thought it was dramatic and the good thing about having dramatic bits in a story is they make it better! This ...

This story was so enjoyable that I was sad when I came to the end of it. I like the way you describe the vampires (if they are the vampires) ...

A very good and eye - catching story.

Hello iceprincess, You wrote a great story which I very much enjoyed. I didn't know how to pronounce the names, but they were very funny names, but I still enjoyed ...

I am 8 years old and I have been reading David Copperfield. I wanted to know what happened to Mr Murdstone and his sister, Jane Murdstone. As it doesn't say ...