Charlii101

really good loving how the story makes me want to read more and i really do want to read more write more write more!! loving how your not giving most ...

WOW! really good loving how it all connects together and you want to know more about the story! sorry but i just didn't get the ending bit i understood how ...

this story really kept me going wanting to read more but i found a few slip ups (that everyone does) which kind of pulled me away for a bit and ...

Earth is full on unnatural things lerking in the dark, waiting for it's victim or as the legend goes a dreamwatcher will free the children of Earth, Haylii Slowgon has ...

i think this is a really emotional poem it's got the right context to it and gives a bit of the story line to it enjoying how the lines weave ...

"How could he cheat on me with Cindy Williams ... okay I’ll give him the big boobs reason but still ..." Max passed his best friend Kirsty a WKD and ...

thanks for the comments guys, sorry it was hard to get, i will take your advice and try and edit it so it's suitable, thaks alot i haven't taken any ...

(the year is 1872) The sun beamed down on my sweating back and my ginger hair fell down below my shoulders, it’s very rare that I get a chance to ...

oooo loving the cliff hanger!!! i like how the story is leading up to something good (or it seems like it will) i hope it does any way, to improve ...

i liked the story line and how the story unfolds but it does go a bit too fast also i don't get who Ned and Mike are?? it got a ...

wow that is amazing attually brought me to tears! i really liked it and it gave off the empression of sorrow and regret it's got good grammer and i can't ...

i find this really good with the memories clashing with the reality stage! this is because you can pull apart the memories from reality easily and i believe this is ...

i think it's dead good poetry but i don't really understand what message it's trying to get across :?