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Charliebo

  • Lyric Poetry Re: Moments

    That was nice! Good job. I thought that the enjambement was a little awkward in places (excuse the spelling please, i'm useless) because some phrases seemed to benefit from the ...

    Apr 29, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Mortal thoughts.

    If, in some deep, unthought of place, The dead could congregate with grace, They'd shuffle, wartorn, young and old, All breathless in the dusty cold, Of every race, creed and ...

    Apr 29, 2008


maybe the backs are the stories we made along the way
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