Charliebo

Super cool! just the title rocks, and the poem is even more amazing! Top notch. I agree that perhaps changing the word 'imaginery' may improve the poem even further, as ...

Thanks! ^^

Can never be described... Only defined. Too often is condemned To live on the surface, And in murky pools In the eyes of the shallow. Wishes, longs, aches, Yearns to ...

My god! It's genius! It flowed like a dream and the words were well chosen. I am pleased to say that i have no critisism! ^^

This had a lot of feeling! Even though I wasn't entirely sure about whether it was the same dog, which i'm not sure whether was a bad thing; it may ...

As a poem, i think it has potential! It's interesting and the repetitive lines give it personality that other poetry lacks! Cliche is an overused word! This poem could mean ...

MAGDALENA I had my own problems. Firstly, my parents are dead. I’m not dead, as you may have guessed. Still, I’m not exactly bereaved, either – my father wasn’t much ...

That was lovely - short but sweet. I think you're right to add however many stanza's you want to a poem like that! It's already pretty short and your just ...

Wow! Super coool! seriously, this is what poetry is about, isn't it? Writing what the hell you want in a lyrical way and just being expressive through rhythm and words! ...

sorry if it came off as there for the rhyming, but i specifically wanted to use the word unsmelt - the whole poem is to illustrate the fact that music ...

On winds it wafts, like scent unsmelt, Without passing lips, on tongues may melt, Distinct to touch though left unfelt, Kindling every sense. Bright enough to blind the eyes One ...

Actually, i disagree with all of the above. I think that the poem kept to it's rhythm really well - which is, in my mind, an essential aspect of poetry ...

Beyond my window’s dusty pane, Either side the travellers lane, The meadows fold, Like seas of gold, Wreathed in plants That nature grants To embroider its flaxen gown, Adorned in ...

I thought it was original - the repetitive ideas were few and worked really nicely! Maybe steer clear of breaking up lines in a poem like this, i.e lines like ...

I thought it was nicely done, although i wasn't sure about tum-tum tree... it just brought jabberwocky to mind!! It was definately it's own poem - the way it reads ...