Charade

Harro, TwinSeed. ^-^ (There are 147 words written to this poem.) First off, I love this line: I know that no one lives forever, but when you were taken from ...

Wow, I loved how the opening and the closing were some of the most epic lines. ^-^ My personal favourite line was: Till the morning dawn breaks, and his soul ...

I thought it was pretty good. Maybe it’s just me, but with lyrics, I’m more into meaningful songs. BUT! That being said, this is a lighthearted song, which also serves ...

Hi, Dreamingforever *waves* I LUV the bubble picture a lot. The colors are beautiful! ^-^ Willow tree and russian dolls were prob my second favs. Other than those, the others ...

Sorry, vampirelover101, but I totally and absolutely disagree with you. Writing comes from the heart, and God clearly dwells within this girl's heart. She writes what's written on her heart, ...

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! Freaks, Hated, We are different. Our guide is unknown to them; They call the emotion fake, Temporary, Nonexistent. Our leader is hard; They are afraid. I LOVE ...

Harro, Wulf ^-^ First off, I like the way you mentioned her hair color, and then slid in the eye color as a side thought. If that makes sense at ...

Harro, Robin. ^-^ First off, I’d like to say I love the emotion in this. It’s so . . . . Real, to me. You name is like a scar ...

Thanks so much ^-^ Lol Those parts "were" questions as well, but I was told by several people that "Its just a list of questions!" So I changed it. Something ...

I absolutely love this! XD The theme, the air it has----I loved it. I don’t know what to comment on exactly, because it was so good lol I guess the ...

Harro, Cairo ^-^ The beginning was very promising, and very well written. Fresh tears run down her face, burning her cheeks before disappearing into the night air. Her hands are ...

We’re wingless in this aimless flight, Armless in this bitter fight. Like birds in the sky, We all fly, We all try, And for what? These lifeless cages in scripted ...

Thanks so much for your reply ^-^ I thought I should clarify a few things real fast: “What Creature That Has Made Itself Ready For The Patience Of Love. . ...

okay, first off I would like to say that this is not the more "complete" version of "what's not to love?", because I’m using a computer that has an older ...

Hiya, I love the ending line: “Is this real?” It added so much to the poem. That being said, I would add more detail. It has potential. A lot, in ...