Chaoshound

Okay....seems like a fairly good review has been done here. Still, i would like to add that the opening scene is pretty confusing and doesn't seem to explain anything much. ...

Okay, so here's part of a story i and a friend of mine are writing, and i wanted independent opinion of our work. So i decided to post it here ...

I guess this story was pretty good, but it seemed a bit rushed to me. The descriptions was okay but needed a bit more work, in my opinion. The setting ...

Wow. The prologue is awfully short, and like Jiggity said, it's pretty vague for a fantasy novel. Other than that, i enjoyed the battle scene. It was terrific!

Hi there. This is the Chaoshound and i'm an 18 year old living in the kingdom known as the white man's grave{That's Africa to you}.I love to write and read. ...