Chantel

I agree with Surreal. The negativity wasn't really an issue for me. I think that it worked because you used negativity all the way though. You like no part of ...

I think that poem really did capture the feelings of the narrator. I'm no expert at poetry, but I think that was rather good. I don't think it deserved the ...

Wow, that story is so good! You had me hooked all through, I was disappointed when it ended! It's great that you are going to carry on writing it, I ...