Chantel

I didn't actually know that, so thanks :D Most of this story probably won't be exactly according to the rules of the real Big Brother anyway, I don't know enough! ...

Thanks for the comments :D I think I've changed the spelling mistakes, but if there are more please let me know. The symbolism for the bluebird won't be clear right ...

Nice idea, I like it. :D

I agree with Surreal. The negativity wasn't really an issue for me. I think that it worked because you used negativity all the way though. You like no part of ...

An idea I came up with a while back. I came here to escape this, but everywhere I go I see his face staring back at me. In the twisted, ...

I really like that :D

This is just a first draft of the introduction for a story I'm writing for my GCSE Coursework. The central character, is based on my friend, Platy, and she portrays ...

Yay, I'm not alone! :D I'm so happy!

The Voice What is the voice in your head? Is it your conscience? Is it you? Is it God? Can you trust your senses? Can you trust your heart when ...

Wow. So much negative feedback. I can't help feeling that these comments are a personal attack on me. I don't get offended too easily, but this time, it's hard not ...

I think that poem really did capture the feelings of the narrator. I'm no expert at poetry, but I think that was rather good. I don't think it deserved the ...

I really liked that :D Definately carry on writing, I think you'll go far!

Surely I can't be the only person who has read 'The Lovely Bones' By Alice Sebold? I've asked around my school but nobody seems to have read it. If you ...

Wow, that story is so good! You had me hooked all through, I was disappointed when it ended! It's great that you are going to carry on writing it, I ...

Change Of Career, Sir? The famous Gingerbread Man - otherwise known as ‘Big G’ to acquaintances has had a career change, from being the humble victim of a mass countryside ...