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Re: Favourite Lyrics
THIN LIZZY ::dancing in the moonlight (its caught me in its spotlight):: When I passed you in the doorway You took me with a glance I should have took that ...
Dec 13, 2005 -
Re: Favourite Lyrics
ok, i have a real obsession with song lyrics so this is a tiny selection of some of my favourites.... "All you need is love" is a lie 'cause We ...
Dec 13, 2005 -
Re: What are you listening to at the moment?
boats and birds - gregory and the hawk i am in love with this song. it is so beautiful. if you love pretty voices and pretty lyrics, be prepared to ...
Dec 10, 2005 -
Re: he plays with fire
we go for a walk on an empty night. i meet him under an oak tree. the leaves are dying under a golden light. we sit on a cold brick ...
Dec 7, 2005 -
Re: perfection
i liked this really quite absolutely a lot. i get the feeling "but you never wanted to be called a masterpiece" will be rolling around my mind for quite sometime.
Nov 14, 2005 -
Re: Kissing Polly
i liked it. a lot. it was simple and i iliekd the rhyme. i dunno, i don't normally like poetry like this but this appealed to me. although, yeah, it ...
Nov 10, 2005 -
Re: king of spades
i found it confusing...and i didn't find it grabbed me enough to spend time figuring it out...i reallyreally like the first verse, but after that you lost me.
Oct 19, 2005 -
Re: Do you think I am Romantic, or a Passionate Nothing?
yeah that's one way......a pretty good way.....but not the only way... guys need to learn that.
Oct 2, 2005 -
Re: Do you think I am Romantic, or a Passionate Nothing?
i think just a guy saying "you look beautiful tonight" is the nicest thing in the world. if it's all rhyming/poetic, it sounds contrived and a little insincere, no matter ...
Oct 1, 2005 -
Re: Randomness
every time i see a certain little kid walking through my school, i shout hello pedro and he hi-5s me, even though we don't know each other and i am ...
Sep 20, 2005 -
Re: school again
i actually found the constant repition of "again" quite soothing..it's a very simple, but it's pretty much how i feel today so that made me like it.
Sep 20, 2005 -
Re: imprints of him
a tug of the tie, two fingers pulling cranberry-red silk loose, a habitual toss of your head making a fold of hair fall into your eyes open collar revealing soft ...
Sep 20, 2005 -
Re: Working Title: .... uh, I dont have one
porcelain throne? hahahahahahahahaha. TOILET. hahahahahahahahahahaha. sorry it might not be constructive but that really just cheered me up. and the story was very nice, too. i can't say i'm that ...
Sep 14, 2005 -
Re: The Sky
for me there was just way too much description and not enough emotion. if you're just going to describe something (like clouds or the sky) then it's probably only going ...
Sep 13, 2005 -
Re: Night Blanket
the last two lines were unnecessary and disrupted the flow - "space" would have looked better if it was seperate from the rest of the poem, but really it didn't ...
Sep 13, 2005
