Chanson

i didn't say it was wrong because i realise poetry can't be wrong, it's an art. that doesn't stop you from not enjoying it sometimes. i never write poems that ...

personally i think that whatever happens, the fighting has to end. they should have merged with the south back in the early 1900s, but when the irish people (devalera and ...

too simple. too easy to write. not enough...poetry. more like a random stream of thought, which can be very pretty and interesting. but this...wasn't so much. i mean, i know ...

you know i guess i was confused by this. i didn't get a feel for who the He was or for who the narrator was. but i liked it, mainly ...

i wasn't sure about that line. it would be great to have some more help on it. thanks for the suggestions :lol:

hmmm, i'm not sure about this. i really enjoy prose but this didn't seem like prose. or poetry. it seemed unsure and shakey. i have experienced severe anxiety before and ...

"it is the definition of madness to do the same thing over and over and expect a different result."----- Einstein late nights when all the others had gone home sitting ...

eh, honestly i don't even remember sending ths poem in and it was yesterday. i wasn't exactly... thinking straight. so i apologize deeply.

hmm, lucky you. i just sat there. looking at the fields and the lakes. watching sheeps shag. i would like to be able to say manchester is cool but i ...

people from manchester are called mancunians? that is cool. but random. i feel unnaturally proud that you liked dublin. although i am sorry to hear you had to spend any ...

miss sixty jeans black cord blazer thing that has lots of zips and a cool silky gold lining that i stole from my friend but i get the feeling it ...

i is from dublin. but my friends know loads of guys from manchester and whenever i speak to them i am always impressed by sexiness of accent. plus my uncle ...

i love you and i thought loving you guaranteed the happy fairytale ending i imagined us going to bad movies laughing at how ridiculous it was feeling superior to the ...

my i-pod=my life. it's kind of become like a body part. it's permanently attached. i'm known as the pod-whore. IT'S NOT MY FAULT. trust me to fall in love with ...

my thoughts kind of go to fast and i get confused over the keys. i dont think it'll be changing any time soon :)