Chanson

everything about me depends on you. this is something that haunts me long into the sleepless nights staring out at the parking lot, imagining the ocean i hear waves against ...

i think most people will think this is wonderful. for me, it was far too ornate. over decorated to the point of making it almost tacky. i felt a kind ...

this was very beautiful. i'm sure you know that because you wrote it and if you write something liek this, you have to know. the images were gorgeous. i could ...

i got it (i hope!). very smart, you make me jealous. the actual POEM didn't blow me away, although it was good. a little simple, a little bare. maybe it ...

i like. it sums up my sundays entirely. that act of doing nothing and the feeling that it's ok. the first verse i wasn't in love with the poem, i ...

oh, ok. one flaw. the title. something more...romantic. and pretty, like the story.

i loved this. it was an interesting subject. it reminded me of movie-type love but you made it realistic. i used to write stories like this, before i decided to ...

Here I am, losing myself. Pressing into your body, enwtining my legs through yours. We knew this would happen tonight. We felt it, could taste it in the air. Your ...

I watch you. Yes, I know how that sounds. You have an image of me now, don't you? I would. Classic infatuated geek. Pale, wearing a green cable-knit sweater, wiry ...

Talking Heads vs Dire Straits and if firestarter tries to tell anyone that dire straits aren't a real band, i'll blow up manchester.

muse muse vs the smashing pumpkins

midnight --) nah, not coerced. they just compromised too much, which i think was a weakness on their part. they didn't think it through enough.

ha. me likes.

hunter - what i believe to be poetry. this isn't my idea of peotry. there are all sorts of diiferent ideas of what it is, that is how new poetry ...

apart from the spelling (their, not 'there', 'too' not to) i really liked it. i thought it was pretty powerful for a short poem and also thought provoking. cool.