Chanson

This was a little simple, a little bit too verging-on-a-ramble for my tastes. I think a little more imagery would have gone a long way in this piece. That isn't ...

oh, this was very pretty. i liked it, although I got a little lost at the end of the second verse. I think I found the idea again, although I ...

may i just point out that greenday suck? and that U2 rock (#glares at firestarter#. it's coz they're irish isn't it? you english always have to keep us down. kidding, ...

yes, it's a true story. unfortunately :) thanks for all the great comments. (and i will definitley work on the a) b) c) pargraph, I'm not sure about it myself).

So, I was just another girl. You had a list. A plan, a scheme. Call it what you will. Did I have a number? Girl number 34? Do I get ...

Perfection hides in your every pore Gentle, graceful perfection With you, it would not be possible To ever ask for more. The soft sheen of daybreak Diamond dewdrops fallen fresh ...

micah -- hey i've been here for a week or three now and i just figured that out today :) niteowl -- any better??? and i before e thing made ...

i really loved the first two verses, they were so good they made the rest of the poem rather insignificant. the second to last verse was a little muddled, a ...

yeah, i liked it. i loved the characterization. i was so sad for the girl, though, but that is only because i am a crazy feminist. or so my algebra ...

this had some wonderful lines, some great images. for somewhat, i relate to it. the verse: But I feel that my spell is fading, and you fall captive to the ...

what's the guy thinking? yeah, i wish i knew that, too. thank you very mucho for the comments :D

he feels the same way? that isn't fair! #dies of envy# i think i would change the first verse. it just didn't GRAB me. i think the poem is pretty ...

have you ever skipped school? or pretended to be sick to miss school? what is the longest you have managed to do the latter one? what do you normally do ...

CREAM (meatloaf???????) Cream vs Electric Light Orchestra

i feel exactly like that right now. i probably woudln't have liked this poem so much if it didn't describe so exactly how i feel. the good thing about poetry ...