Chanson

none of these re at all good, or revised, but i'm just enjoying the challenge of making myself write a poem a day.some days it's more challenging than others...and it ...

Your words lack substance. I let them wash over me, pass through me like white noise. But, your kiss leaves me breathless. The secret pink of your mouth, the taste ...

"Stupid commercial holiday," I declared, throwing back my hair. Cheers of agreement from the rest of the class. And yet I pictured you waiting for me, standing at the front ...

i loved this. i had a big critique written out there but i just deleted it because none of it really mattered. all that matters is, this is a very ...

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i had tons of imaginary friends. not like, stuffed animals or dolls. although i had those too, lots of them, that were like super real to me and i had ...

"the blood vessel orchestra pounds in her ears" the end was certainly choppy, you know that, so no need to critique. i just thought i'd tell you i really loved ...

oh god i love made....the people always look like fools but at least they get to learn new things. well worth looking like a bit of a tit. i would ...

We are touching, shoulder to shoulder Bound together by a thick, warm blanket, The sea flings itself at the cliff over and over. In the navy sky, a solitary star. ...

4/10

Mmm, yeah it feels like after the new shoes bit i just kind of lost the flow. I suppose I don't know how to end the poem because I don't ...

Remember how it felt? That missed a step, turbulence in the airplane, smiling alone on the bus feeling? So simple. We were headed for the Ever After. It was just ...

i loved the line "nostalgia won't save us from tomorrow"

*( reworked )* It hurts to think of you. Thinking brings salty tears tracing paths down my cheek and a million insecurities take over. I never meant to feel this ...

7/10