Chanson

Thanks so much for the comments guys! Also, in an effort to look at the likes, I liked my own post... how embarrassing, sorry.

VIDEO SHOP GUY: A small independent video shop opened up across the road from my house, owned by a nice 30 something man and his mum. I was about seven ...

If you're going to write a story that involves subjects that are so incredibly emotional for so many people, I feel you have to have a strong understanding of what ...

You are gone, I think. Your books lie like islands on the floor, The emerging dawn seems uneven. This is not a cry of emotion - No grand gestures in ...

The subject matter you are attempting to deal with here is very interesting to me and something I'm very passionate about. Dealing with the fall out of abuse in the ...

I like the angle this poem is written from but I think the poem needs to be reworked. There are just too many words - too many words, too many ...

Space Boy Dream - Belle And Sebastian And when I woke up, and I was lying in the darkness, I thought I had landed and I just lay still for ...

i thought you would be The One like they talk about in films and magazines couldn't believe i had found you down the road thought i'd have to at least ...

You're a forest after rainfall. That heady smell of wet leaves, rotting vegetation. Everything is messy, damp. Soil sticks to my skin, crystal drops glint on spider webs. In dark ...

[part three] What is it, I don't remember Made my being so much better If I could have just one pure thought - One Pure Thought, Hot Chip * [049, ...

[part two] [015, calm] I think my favourite part of relationships are the bits in between. The moments in between words, in between kisses. Those moments of calm , short ...

backroundbob - ok...this will sound really weird, but what's the name of the guy sitting to the right of you (well i guess on the left of you? whatever...) in ...

I really liked the repetition of "yes" in the last stanza. I thought it was very interesting, adding a kind of stream-of-consciousness feel to the poem (obviously the intention, as ...

The beginning was perfect... I met you in a club on one of those summer nights that make you think you might live forever. The air was crisp, but warm ...

If you want a different kind of romance novel, one of my favourite books in the world is The Greengage Summer by Rumer Godden. It's really fantastic, I've read it ...