Chandni

I would like this to be posted in the "Other Poetry" section. Comments there are most likely to be appreciated. Cheerios, Chandni

First of all it's nothing I haven't read before and failed at impressing me or showing me something new. About the rhyming scene, it's basically spread all over. You're first ...

I found this very abstracted, which is exactly what I like. I've been able to think over this piece and found myself highly enjoyed. Now that I've found myself being ...

Nice and adequate. You have some nice descriptions allthough I'd rather see this poem in a second person form rather than in a first person form. "You're good people, girl." ...

8/10 hooray :D

I dare not flail the gap, that lunatic missile heading towards this body, while numbered audiences applaud and clap. It may be fatal, it may be? I dare not seek ...

Allright, allright :) Simplistic, nice poem. I haven't got much to say here, just one thing. The first three stanzas accentuate the "connection" you want the readers to know about, ...

It was a nice read, no doubt about that. One thing, the title was rather "unattractive" long and dull. Too much explanation for a title. Off to the poem itself, ...

I'm very sorry but this does not belong in the Poetry section :( *Shouts out to Mods*

comments are unappreciated. I'm not sure what you mean by that? :? But okay off to the poem itself. Hatred and Pain both of kin alike, Shadows that cast Fear ...

Your first comment on this article Brad :) The pleasures of poetry, well on this International Poem Day this sure gave me nice read! Cheerios, Chandni

Well, atleast a PG-13 :roll:

Ahum, this should be Rated R, that's all I have to say ;) Cheerios, Chandni

Okay, so this was well descripted and all and surely a nice read just as I expect everything you write to be :P unfortunately there was something I had to ...

Everything Claudette said except for one more minor mistake. First line, "cages" not "cadges" Cheerios,Chandni