Chandni

I'm sorry but I have to agree with 'The Black Rose' Try better next time :?

Thank you guys..I really worked on this poem before i posted it so I guess my Hard worked is paid :wink: :D

Okay this poem was like not very good :? I should work on it a bit more The Unexpected had happened and just when it had passed I had allready ...

This is very good...I like it I'm soo impressed by guys who can rhyme...Wow I love you right now...hahahha I really liked Good job !!

Very nice !! :D just a few things tough I'm the whose heart feels all the tension, Im the one whose heart feels all the thension I'm the guy who ...

thank you and I've made the changes you told me to :wink:

Thnx :D

thnx..I don't think its one of my best ones tough

Fly like an eagle,swim like a fish Take me on your journey, so I can leave this rubbish Take me to the rainbows, take me to the butterflies Take me ...

Unexpected, there you were infront of me Unexpected, we crossed eachothers ways, just in time to see Unexpected, it all had happened so fast I just wish I could make ...

hey thnx Chevy but I wasn't feeling comfertable by putting "" semicollons (or whatever you call them) Cuz that would sound a bit joke to..

I know... :lol:

its okay... one thing try to use a word only one time I wish that we weren't through But then again you never knew How much I really felt for ...

Once again I am flawwless, I can sink in your words, so soft an mellow yet so complicated they are

Hey thnx !! I think i'll leave it like this but in my next poems i'l take note to what've said. And I will find an original topic to write ...