Chandni

Well i changed it a bit..the third stanza i'll see what I can do with the second one Thnx :)

Cold winds lost in time, they take away, they shatter lifes. Empty spaces in your body, they fill it up with ice. Ice so cold it turns in to stone, ...

is it allready over ?

What are Parody's ?/ I looked it up in the Dictionary Dutch-English and I got "Parodie"... Looked it up in a Dutch Dictionary and I got an explanation but I ...

Yeah I had a problem facing this myself but now I know better it takes a while but once you can face this your a new person

Well thnx I don't think I will change it cause I don't really feel like I like it the way it cuz it kinda shows my feelings for someone.. I ...

Well here's a Theory I made based on personal experience, I don't know if it makes any sence but yeah its worth trying to post it.. -Worrying about people doesn't ...

Take a look in my mind, be surprised of what you will find. Take a step forward, and walk towards My thoughts and feelings combined with the truth, my thoughts ...

hey you guys got nymore comments on this ??

I know you sucked jups it definniteley did I wasn't sure of it that's why I posted it Sometimes something you hate turns out to be something liked by others...NOT ...

I won the lottery !! I chose lucky number seven, too bad I didn't win a one-way ticket to heaven. I did it !! I caught the biggest fish, too ...

Thnx Snoink I'm not English so sometimes I've got some problems with my Grammar :wink: OOPs I Capatilized the G in Grammar and again LOL :P

Nice !! I especially like this : we sit on a cold brick wall. he turns my worlds upside umop. down That's really cool I like it !!

There's a place where all My toughts flow A Place where all My feelings manage to go A Waistland deserted and all Alone A Waistland cold and all of My ...

Its funny LOL :P