Chandni

When hopes wall falls down and breaks, humanity realizes it made a mistake. Conspiracy taken by those who rule, soon they'll notice; humanity's fool. Fact or fiction? choose or die, ...

yess it was inspired by DCFC :wink:

Nice job here :thumb: really liked it :) here's my fav. part : And I find myself waiting, the clouds all passing by. For the wind to hearken to my ...

hmmm the title and topic aren't original which makes it harder for you to do something good out of it..you know something original..and you didn't I'm sorry :( This line ...

A stroke of blue and a spot of orange, visualize the sun and the ocean. A mist of black and a dot of white, the midnight glow reflects commotion. A ...

“A concrete wall of massive destruction” That’s what he considered himself. So ready to achieve and willing to succeed “A huge disgrace to the human race” That’s what others considered ...

Funny !! Hahahaha

Very Nice, Your imaginary is very cool. I like your way of words lol they remind me of a friend of mine. Your Grammar is Fine ! No Complaints at ...

Intresting..a bit confusing the stanza's well there a bit off rythem I should say. "To betray is to love without choosing," you said as we stood alone at the twilight. ...

my... yeah i dunno i'm not honna put a name or anything it is supossed to be a name tough.. his own soul... :wink:

"I should've known it was Daffy Duck all along..." She always liked writing, putting her mystical thoughts on a piece of paper. Relieving and soothing it felt. Sometimes she’d run ...

He struck my heart, he struck my heart badly.His glimmering eyes and sunshiney smile, the warmth you feel when he's around. I am beneath him, I am too young. I'm ...

it was okay ;) I really liked the first stanza the second one is a bit off rythem.. the last stanza just seemed to bother me I think it is ...

Speechless just wonderfull really nicely done perfect lenght the rhyming everthing just wonderfull :)

Hi I'm Chandni, I don't like being asked for my name, why ? cause I wouldn't know what to say. My name has a lot of pronaunciations and I wouldn't ...