Chandni

Wow :shock: Strong Strong message here, very good indeed ;) a few turns and tweaks would sure do this good or shall we say better :) They light candles , ...

yess, inderdeed very pretty :)

Troelaszz I live on Curacao, tiny lil' island next to Aruba

A column/speech I had written trying to position myself in these people's shoes, trace their mind's footsteps :wink: Melodramatic seems to be, the case of these “new” people. People? Yes ...

aha, backgroundbobbie :) lemme read it over tomorrow, you know get the essence out of it ;) From what I understood till now, it sounds good ;) Greetings, Chandni

Clouds are dusty, not cold, not warm. Appearing at night, shivering, stuttering, spreading their red. Once clouds were settled, once clouds stood still. Today they are clever, for what spreads ...

hmmm, thnx for ur comment ;) would you be so kind telling me what kind of poetry is it then ?? Dramatic ?? thnx

I liked the beginning...Really thought you were gonna bring sumthing outta it...but yeah its okay..I've written some weird poem with no meaning just happens...don't feel bad about it :wink:

I......understand.... the title makes it a bit confusing, I so did not want to name it Untitled :?

urghhhh....why does ''overdose'' make you think about suicide !?!?!? its not..... jeeezzz

aha :) very nice indeed as mentioned above it sounds great when read out loud but there's only one thing that bothered me :? Do you remember The fireflies that ...

Shiver cause its cold outside, Inside there’s a warmer future. Fear cause plenty isn’t known, Trust is the new way to meet. Measure distances, Calculate force. Distinguish evil, and gather ...

Photographed walls, scented with Joy’s perfume. Pleasures which lead to another, Moments captured and embraced. All of a sudden, no warning at all. A black light crawls among the pleasant. ...

Take a step forward, look inside. Be surprised of what you’ll find. Keep on walking, explore my youth. My thoughts and feelings, revealing the truth. My feelings travel, they travel ...

H00ray for YWS !! :D Thank you soo soo much Nate :) I was on vacation so I didn't realize YWS opened earlier than expected :oops: But here I am ...