Chandni

As Snoink said, it starts rather dull but finds it way later on. You could've made the title a bit more intriguing. A bit too simplistic. You could've done a ...

Well this is well thought, as long as the new people bare in mind that there ARE free critiques as well :D All the best ;) Cheerios, Chandni

Aha, that was a brilliant read :) Truly I loved it. I would call it a tee bit abstract, but that's just me. After all abstract is one thing that ...

Mhmm, I lack emotion it read very dull and boring. It doesn't flow, I'm just reading sentence after sentence and there is no sense of excitement to be found. I ...

I guess I spoke too soon :( But I guess it'll be back soon!:D

Nice pictures Shriek! Who's that funny dude in the third picture :P Me and my lovely boyfriend :) Random picture of myself :P Bubble making :D

It's looking nice as a whole. It flowed well and I like your use of description. I figured it was rather hard to understand the poem and align the stanza's ...

7/10 the red sticking out is awesome, but the scene isn't all that fascinating

Back, and the portfolios are in tip top shape :D *Cheers*

I'm going to have to go with Christianity although the point explained above is something I surely agree with. I'm just open-minded I guess and believe I believe in the ...

Yay! I was just about to get active again and found out it was down, but now it's all back to normal :D Thanks a load Nate :) Cheerios, Chandni

Different, that's all I have to say here. And I mean it in the most positive way ever :) Sorry, this wasn't useful at all. Cheerios, Chandni

Our philosophies stood separate yet your magnetic field was attracted to mine. Et vice versa. We contaminated each others thoughts, as if they were devoted - ready to be combined ...

I wished you could go deeper on this, it's short for what could've been longer and more enjoyable. I'll have to agree with Xanthan and say, "shhhh..." is better off ...

Hooray for Snoink :D Be proud, very proud ;)