Chandni

erhmmm I only read books in dutch so that wont come in handy for any of you I guess lol :P

Saw 2 very disturbing :S

I know what you mean Griffin, it was just all so terrible, and even not being an American being here on this small island where nothing could possibly happen, 9/11 ...

Wow, I really liked this :) Just one quick note : Breathing to the rythym Of the crashing waves and silence But for the water's whispers. Then your voice, low ...

No Prob there Nate :) Sounds sweet what your going to do ;) you know if once I become a poet and promote my book, I"ll send my regards to ...

if you like indie, Hot Hot Heat is totally awesome ! big chance you already know them though haha :P

I'm in this period where I totally dig acoustic music ! On my list : Teitur Tom Mcrae Jack Johnson Damien Rice Any more cool acoustic/alternative artists ? Thnx !

thnx for the crit niteowl ;) I changed "In my heart, In my soul" it does sound rather odd after I repeat "Octave Heart" at the end :) thnx for ...

I touch, I feel the adrenaline through my fingers Every press, every skip, every step on the pedal I dance, I twinkle my body warmth creates; In my soul, an ...

Very Very enjoyable :) I like ur rhyming although it's very simple

I like your beginning :) and as said above, I agree. also in the end your stanza's get fuller.... which makes it look a bit odd overall ----- ------ ------- ...

Hoeeraaa YWS gaat vooruit !! :D

Hi I'm Chandni, I don't like being asked for my name, why ? cause I wouldn't know what to say. My name has a lot of pronaunciations and I wouldn't ...

whahaha nice one background ;) Good Luck !! :D

yess very surprised background :P