Chandni

At first I found the flow well suiting and enjoyable, but you've seen to repeat alot of words which makes it rather boring/anoying in the end. I'm very found of ...

5/10 I'm not a huge Batman fan, but it is quite funny though lol

The essence here is great :) I'm not a fan of your structure but you managed to fit it all in. I found it a little short though, perhaps more ...

Chandni Dwarkasing, I guesss lol

I'm not forcing anyone to critique in any kind of way, I'm just giving opinions one which critiques are best for the writer :) Cheerios, Chandni

You're a 100% right Snoink ;) Tell me what I'm good at and what not, now that's a critique. People should to see the positivism in some things, even if ...

The Critique Idea is indeed very neat :) I'm using the YWS-Dark version and everytime there is something quoted I'll have to highlight it with my mouse to read it, ...

The background is not to be seen by me, since I'm using YWS Dark, but I've seen, and it is wintery :) Brings the cold al the way to the ...

Hi and welcome to YWS :D As Snoink said, music is also a big part of writing :) As for myself I get inspired by it! Make yourself at home, ...

Jan Terlouw :)

Ikes, I'm very sorry for I thought I had made things clear enough for everybody, so it is that it is only clear for me, :oops: I would like to ...

A cryptogram drained by empty spaces Heaps of dots; its only taste of ink Collusion between confusion -A pen, a scrap of paper- Sweat grieves on your forehead, The clock ...

Well, the useal I guess Brad, well done descriptions etc. For some reason I didn't like the 2 line structure and the way you cut off the sentences in order ...

Hmmm look at J.K Rowling not so succesfull before she started writing now was she... I'm not sure if she went to college but she didn't quite have a nice ...

Yes I agree, I've indeed argued myself through "beneath our melancholic ocean" line. I will edit indeed, thnx for enlightning my image a bit :)