Chandni

exactly, the ending just "that's it-ed" me lol It was indeed a great movie though, definitely a must-see. and hey, I liked the way you explained it all, kept me ...

I've hardly read poetry by those proffesional poets. But I'd say Rosabelle Illes is my favourite poet :) Universal Truth by her is my fav :)

Behold what’s beyond as we conquer this geometric object, remembrance anguished trough divinity resting at its pace Abstract images sustain, fooling those detached from their source. The universe pa

Hey Brad, I found this a bit tweak to what I've read before, offcourse there is no need to compare, but I am used to seeing you write a little ...

Okay yeah I'm feeling you Izzy, first off I am not demanding any change, let the poem be. This is just feedback and information you may need for your further ...

looby-lou, what we're basically trying to say is that it looks like you've been using forced rhyming to bring your essence forward, which wasn't nescesarry. Poetry does not have to ...

Wow! that looks just great :D Very entertaining as well, keep up the work! Cheerios, Chandni

My Dear and Fellow YWS'ers Happy New Year! All The Best For 2007 !! With lots of Joyfull Writings ! And a happy happy NaNoWriMo to come ! :D Lots ...

Huh? If anything, (I, personally, think) it takes a lot more skill to write a poem that rhymes. If you ask me, poems should rhyme. How do you even know ...

He... disturbing really :( Poor kiddo, I remember you talked about this in the chatroom MR Waffles, didn't quite take it seriously as I do now...

Congrats Fand ! :) And you were close Claud ! :D Cheerios, Chandni

Same here Claud and Writeme :) At my mom's family I got : -Candles -Alarm Clock -A Gift Card from this cocky place :p -A Cool Shirt -A Necklace -JOSH ...

A pencil or pen, I'll vote for a pencil though cause it just flows more :) but hey sometimes I run out of pencils haha I surely enjoy handwriting more ...

Dun Dun Dun :) Nicely done, very well discripted and a nice usage of words. Some sentences are a bit long and overdone We are all good guys, [s]all[/s] bad ...

Hi and Welcome to YWS:) I was toggling through the Dramatic Poetry section and this wasn't what I was looking for, really. This is not recalled poetry at all anything ...