Chandni

Thanks! and that's indeed my room colour :)

Act of Love Come near me, I want your skin To slide on mine like it was sin. Lay next to my naked frame And know you needn’t any shame. ...

I haven't seen it before, so your question to "Better?" isn't likely to be answered by me. Overall I liked this, tight discriptions and a nice rythem. That line Colleen ...

Well okay, the structure is indeed as been said above, very disorientated. Try working a bit more organized with your lines here and there. With your words With your kisses ...

Lol, tattoos, I didn't quite think about that when I read it in addition I just thought it was another one of your not-meant-to-be-understood poems XD So there wasn't actually ...

Well, it's a foreign song to most of you and can't tell if you'll like it. The video-clip is a bit vague but the song is amazing. It starts off ...

Yes. This belongs in the lyrics section *Shouts out to Mods :)* Cheerios, Chandni

Dun dun dun, it's Chandni! Yeah Claud the second picture is awesome! Fand I like your glasses :)

Yes, I'm not too fond of the topic either, but that doesn't hold me up. You seem to be using a lot of comma's here, which some of them I ...

granted, but you will keep feeling tired all the time I wish my head was a Johnny Cake

Oops, it looks like a fantasy figure so 7/10

Happy Happy Adminastrating to you ! :D Congrats ;) Cheerios, Chandni

Okay here I go... Here I sit ignored each day. Who am I to be seen? I wait in the shadows to be discovered. He never comes to my rescue. ...

Ok. this wasn't bad, but rather okay. I'd suggest you to add more discription to this, it is too dull and doesn't bring an impact. I've seen this alone topic ...

Opening Credits I just want to fly- Sugar Ray Waking Up Smile- Lily Allen First Day of School Le boulette- Diam's Falling in Love Pillmatic- Gym Class Heroes Breaking Up ...