Chandni

Bah Bah, YWS for life :D although this could've worked when we thought YWS was dead a year ago. BUT that's never ever going to happen again! :D

Might want to look, highly enjoyable :) Cheerios, Chandni

Not much to say here, as it's all been said before ;) but one thing: flaxen and paris, littered with Romanian letters Romanian? isn't it supposed to be Roman ? ...

I'm not a fan of the whole structure here, why not put it all together instead of leaving a line open? Did you want to make your poem look "bigger" ...

Aha, nice nice ;) Nice rythem, the introduction (first stanza) suits me well. Your word-usage and word descriptions are nice and it all fits well together. Allthough I have to ...

Okay first off, the topic is over-the-top cliched how many times have we not seen this take a look around the forums and try to emphasize what's different. You use ...

And she posts something! :) as Colleen said, it was difficult to find the rhyming and the donnez-moi was indeed pretty akward, you said you couldn't find a word that ...

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ah bit of a shocker there :) phew, everything's okay hope you get your colours back :D Cheerios, Chandni

Nice :) I'm no good judge at this but to my concern kobolds are those who work at Gringots in Harry Potter? lol well atleast they are called like that ...

Wouldn't it be better in brown spots?

Granted, but you're cellphone's batteries drop in 5 seconds I wish I had all the licorice in the world :)

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three cheers! hip hip hooray! :D Congrats :) Cheerios, Chandni

Hmmm, well the structure is well not the best. Your whole poem seems to be one huge sentence, where you begin with quoatation marks but where do they end? Pretty ...