Chanahbanana

WOW, that was really good!! very short and effective.=] i agree with niteowl-ont the fifth line the And doesn't need to be there. =) x

I really liked this! although, short it got straight to the point. very powerful. great job! :D

She Hides Behind Her Smile. She told another lie today, She lied with her smile, We nodded hello and walked on by, Without question, without wonder This girl’s alone, This ...

I Liked this, although, i have to agree with niteowl when she says that love is different for other people. i think it is very well written and shows how ...

i agree with Leja, i think that the poem is sweet, and the girl you plan to read it to or have already read it to, will appreciate it- but ...

I don’t know how to show you, Don’t know how to tell you, never let me put into words, Just how I felt, You always saw. You don’t just look ...

although i dont know what your first draft was..i think you must have improved greatly! this poem is very powerful and effective. i like how you have portrayed this person-the ...

i think this poem was pretty amazing.. i love how you have compared the boy to a statue ... Kissing a statue with wooden lips and metal eyes would feel ...