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Warm Dough The sun was setting as the cool air settled softly on the ground, flowing between the looming shadows cast by the masses of pine trees. Connecticut was beautiful ...

Part 2 is coming, I'm sorry it's been so long. I didn't intend to put it off for this long, but all of the functioning computers in my house decided ...

This is an essay I wrote for my English Literature class. It's supposed to be like English author Jonathan Swift's essay, A Modest Proposal , in which he proposes an ...

Not bad. Overall the story was pretty good, and it seemed well thought out for the most part. I liked how Rose put so much effort into some crazy scheme ...

Thanks for the comments, guys. One thing I'd like to point out is that I was intentionally vague with the aliens' descriptions. I wanted the reader to form their own ...

My newest addition to this forum! If this story seems a bit lacking or confusing in some spots, keep in mind that there's a Part 2 on the way that ...

Let me start off by saying this: Bravo! I really did enjoy this. I loved the twist at the end; it was a great way to end the story. It ...

Sorry if this is a bit long, but I still think it qualifies as a short story. I wanted to give it a more creative title than "Toast," but my ...

Toast It was a fine morning in July. The sun was rising, birds were singing outside, and there were only a few minor disruptions in the fabric of time. Arthur, ...

Very nice! Overall, I thought this was good. The one thing that seemed most profound to me, though, was the way you had the characters interact. That scene with Vince ...

Glad you guys enjoyed it! Also, KD, muchos gracias for your lovely review.

More to come, possibly. So, some follow-up info: This story was inspired by my cat, Oliver, who is, as the story implies, very fat. Most of the jokes made in ...

Buddha Cat There once was a cat that was so fat with enlightenment that his belly would touch the ground as he walked. Some knew him as Oliver, but all ...

Howdy y'all I just joined a little while ago and thought I'd put this little introduction together. I'm really not that much of an active writer, but I was always ...