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Re: No Mere Tourist
I'll have to say this was a good and (probably) accurate description and feelings in your Disney trip. With a few revisions this would be even better.
Feb 12, 2007 -
Re: Me or Him?
Oh man...You read A Modest Proposal? Okay...I can't believe that it's so similar to one of the projects I started! But was pretty good but i would have used more ...
Feb 12, 2007 -
Re: How To Write A Novel
I think I know this guy. A user called Chairman posted the same post on my other critique board so I think I've recruited another member. Hurray! *nods head feverently*
Feb 12, 2007 -
Re: To Steal Mine Own
Not bad...but it wasn't really good though. I would like to see some more originality...
Feb 12, 2007 -
Re: The Silenced
Short Note: I intended to have no date, no place, and no lead characters whatsoever, and is that good? And is THIS good? :D The Silenced “Until they become conscious ...
Feb 11, 2007 -
Re: Memorial
Wow...really...wow. I never thought anything until the end. It is really so great...loved suspense
Feb 10, 2007 -
Re: An Inevitable Conclusion
The whole thing is okay, and it's kind of good, but it's still kind of flawed with logical leaps and it's really..um, joycean prose.
Feb 10, 2007 -
Re: How To Write A Novel
How To Write a Novel In a search on Google, it reveals 33,200,000 websites on “How To Write an Novel”. Based on theory, you can write thirty-three million novels based ...
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Re: The Worst Story Ever
Game Rules: It's basically a "countinue-where-i-left-out" activity...but the final product has to be extremely bad. No flaming allowed, but a sudden change of plot and confusing details can be added. ...
Feb 10, 2007 -
Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever
It was a dark - yes, very dark, i suppose - and stormy night. I was, I was...I was...oh, okay - It was a dark and stormy - was it?
Feb 10, 2007
