Ceylon

When you were fighting with the hair stylist, screaming for a refund, I was here in the army, shaving my head. When you were turning down the town's best chef, ...

Cute little poem. Matches your avatar

You didn't have any rhymes, did ya? But who cares about rhymes, your story was so REAL!!! :D :D :D

Lol, funny poem :lol: I got a question. Can we write free style poems?

I think you are over uh... fancing your thoughts into words. The rest of the story was good. :wink:

Well, the music sounds okay, but I don't get the paragrah 1. It sounds kinda confusing.

Whoa. just wandering. I think you should add the fact that Rowling started the Harry Potter story by writing on the knapkins when she couldn't afford the paper. :)

ugh. I have an essay to turn in every week. It might sound fun to some of you guys but it real sucks because I have to write everything of ...

Take some examples from different books of the same category you writing of. I don't mean copy it or anything but get some idea, inspiration, off from it. :D

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Ooooh~ I would like to hear this one day. Sounds cool :D

Hello~ I just want to know if this is a 4/4 or 3/4 song.

Hello~ :D I liked your story except the way you put the writing kinda annoyed me. Don't try to write the story in chunky paragraphs but in little tiny pieces. ...

Wow :o ... Just wow... I never EVER seen any writing like this before. I like your story line and how you worked out the dialogue(it sounded like you are ...

I like your mainstream, story line, but "I did that then I did this" quite uh... annoyed me. I liked your story, it just didn't feel right.