Ceylon

Not bad :) . Well, sorry but I didn't get the last part? what does it mean? Why uh... the things have gone down to drain?

I was having one of my greatest days when "it" happened. I was 6th grade at that time. I woke up in 5 O'clock and jogged around the town a ...

fluffy... (clouds)....

What? Wait... Weren't you the one who wrote the Lord of the Rings (sort of)?

Cool :D . Nice storyline. I love the way you made vivid images of the scenes- it flows like water. :wink: Two things that are turning me down are the ...

I LOVE the setting and general idea of the story; I found them very attractive and well-planned out (creative, too). :D First, never write any form of stories in chunky ...

The pen is stronger. It can perform uh.... multi-tasks :D while swords can only do only thing- kill people.

I want to say that this uh... this brilliantly planned out story is 80% perfect. I believe this story have no grammatical error *cough* I think... All I can say ...

taut

Wait... What do you mean by BUSH? President Bush or just bush? -confused- :shock:

I think we need guns for sure. U.S. Government put the right for Americans to bear arms and I think there's a fair reason backing up that statement. (LOL, you ...

I am what I eat.

a tamed hamster that could jump rope when given a biscuit.

Wow. I'm 6/2. Short for my age, lol

Wow, so much emotion. Well, the poem itself is very creative. You could have done a better job with the transition (line 4 to 5). It's really sudden and a ...