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Re: Savior
the only thing i noticed in these sogn lyrics is that i see where the chorus starts but whee does it end? her is what i do i put a ...
Apr 10, 2010 -
Re: Savior
the only thing i noticed in these sogn lyrics is that i see where the chorus starts but whee does it end? her is what i do i put a ...
Apr 10, 2010 -
Re: Goosebumps fan-fiction: Night at Murder Mansion, part 1
wow that is all i can say about this story is wow but in a good way. this reminds me alot of R.L. Stein's books and stuff. really about the ...
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: Pirates of the Caribbean: The Waves of Jaws
i am a big fan of Pirates of the Caribbean and you did a good job as Captian Cassy said you took to long with the action and i saw ...
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: Legion of Superheroes: Heartland part 2
"Brigid. We're here." My Dad's voice brings me back to the present. We pull up in front of the Legion of Superheroes' Headquarters. My Dad is in the military and ...
Mar 15, 2010 -
Re: Athenry.
She looks down, pulling at his lapels, then met her dark eyes with her own blue ones. “Go on,” she prompts him. i believe you meant met his dark eyes ...
Mar 12, 2010 -
Re: Azula - Story of a Princess (Part 2)
ok i agree with Fortuna you will make a wonderful writer. If that is what you choose to be in life I say go for it. I am just going ...
Mar 11, 2010 -
Re: Legion of Superheroes: Heartland
so in the begining just start with the family moving to the U.S. or what do you think would be a good starting sentence? This is based on the T.V. ...
Mar 11, 2010 -
Re: Ebony Ink
Very interesting. I don't see much of anything wrong with it right now other than i have no clue of who "she" is or "he" for that matter. If you ...
Mar 11, 2010 -
Re: Artemis Fowl Fanfic: Chapter 1
ok. first off i wanted to let you know that i am so excited to find someone who thinks it would be cool to see two Fowls going against each ...
Mar 11, 2010 -
Re: Legion of Superheroes: Heartland
Ok if you want to review this go to the fanfiction novel section. i accidentally posted the others there so just to keep it all together in one place i ...
Mar 10, 2010 -
Re: What Are You Writing Now?
Right now i am in the process of writing a song about Ireland it si coming along fairly well let me know if you have any ideas for lyrics
Aug 10, 2009 -
Re: Any good books I can try?
i am currently reading the Artemis Fowl series by Eoin Colfer and i love it. i would recomend this series to every1. Another book i really enjoy is Daniel's Story ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: Nancy Drew
Ok, I love Nancy Drew she is one of my many faves and I like the idea you have about a stolen locket. You are extremely creative but as the ...
Jul 14, 2009 -
Re: Artemis Fowl Fanfic: Chapter 2
wow this is great. pm me on the next chapter please. i love Artemis Fowl. you did a great job other than minor errors that the others pointed out including ...
Jul 13, 2009
