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Oh wow! You have a gift! This brought tears to my eyes. This was sooo beautiful! please please please keep writing things like this! I can tell you really got ...

Wow I liked this alot. It is really good. I do have a question/suggestion though. When she is at the altar with Edward and she has tears welling up in ...

ok so I'm not very familiar with Harry potter but this actually made sense. There were maybe two or three errors I saw. Bill’s clawed hand was pointing at a ...

Well, overall this was an interesting story it has potential. I can't figure out what this is based on though. As far as errors, I didn't see any other than ...

The two newborns come toward Padraic and I grinning cruelly. Knowing it would do no good to run from vampires we stand there helplessly. "Well, Kieran looks like we got ...

ok overall brilliant! Very accurate. Great display of emotions. Just a couple of nitpicks here though. I: 1947 Rouge and frustration color her cheeks. She lowers her chin and pulls ...

A few weeks later, Padriac and I are playing around in the woods behind the Cullens house with Jasper and Alice when Alice just seems to zone out. We soon ...

ok first off I love how this is coming along. It's similiar to Twilight but more from Edward's point of view. However, there are one or two errors I noticed. ...

ok to begin with honestly I do not know much about this particular anime but I will try to give you a good review here. This overall was pretty good. ...

whoo! This was hilarious! Short but funny! I wanna find out what is gonna happen next! this is probably one of the best twilight parodies i've seen yet. As far ...

The next morning, Dr. Cullen sits down with me and Padraic along with the blonde haired boy and explains that our house can't be repaired, but he will find a ...

all i can say is wow you really made this a bit of an original story. Good job. Other than what the others have mentioned already i don't see any ...

lemme start off by saying good job on this it really makes you think "wow what if edward hadn't been brought up as a vegetarian vampire?" it was pretty cool. ...

I say keep going i wanna find out more about this character i was wondering how the whole Jacob/Renesmee thing was gonna work out. werewolf+halfvampire+halfhuman=one interesting baby. so really other ...

would you mind reviewing my twilight daga fanfic i don't have a title yet but i just want to get some opinions on it topic70355