Celticmusicgirl

Meara which comes from the Irish word "mara" meaning sea Miren or Moiren meaning "Sea White, Sea Fair" also name of a mermaid in Irish mythology Meryl or Muriel meaning ...

May I join in? I have read several books on dragons. Also, if I may join in I would like to create a character.

ok here is the full link to my work I would like you to review here is a link to the other parts in order part one: part two: part ...

work.php?id=95601 please and if you need to read the other parts just let me know and I will give you links to them.

I'll review most anything as long as it is appropriate. I specialize in spelling and grammar. When I review I will be looking for spelling errors and if the wording ...

The spotlight illuminated the stage as the large, red velvet curtains were drawn to reveal an expansive orchestra. It was truly a sight to behold. The violinist's bows, poised and ...

Welcome to YWS! I'm Celticmusicgirl. Ok wow! This is very interesting. I can't hardly wait to find out where you intend to go with this. I think there was only ...

Hey Wolfie! Celtic here! Green= Corrections and suggestions. Blue= I like. Red= incorrect or doesn't make sense. This is the first chapter to my expansion of a short story I ...

This is an interesting piece you have here. I noticed a few grammar mistakes like the pronoun "I" not being capitalized and in the first couple of sentences I notice ...

Bridgid, terrified at being discovered, attempts to figure out her chances of escape. What am I going to do now? If I stay here I'll be killed and Father will ...

"Brian, my old friend. What brings ye here?" Kieran's arms relax and fall to his sides as he sighs with relief. The white haired man dismounts and walks over to ...

green = I liked blue= suggestions and corrections Ok so I know this is a little long and rough but I thought I'd put it on now cause I'm too ...

Ok Wow this is a great piece I found one slight problem. Maybe it's just me but I had a hard time imagining how the other characters besides Silver look. ...

Thanks for your honesty this is my first fantasy story I need all the help I can get!

Thirteen-year-old Bridgid is tending to her brown-and-white stallion, Ryan, in the stables. I need be certain the halter fits well and that the saddle is not too tight. I would ...